OMA: Part 2

Daniel J. Neumann
Llumina Press (2007)
ISBN 9781595268143
Reviewed by Richard R. Blake for Reader Views (2/08)


Award-winning author, Daniel J. Neumann’s writing is stronger than ever in his new book, science-fiction novel, the sequel to “OMA: One Man Army.” In “OMA: Part 2” a fifteen-year-period of peace has elapsed since the “Thirty Year War.” Tensions are growing between Humanity and the Surculus. The Surculus are seeking vengeance by demanding that the Barsilian girl Vanessa be turned over to them or war will be declared.

Neumann has produced a well-crafted plot which is moved forward through crisp, fast-paced dialog. He has allowed his characters, from the Omaha Team, to develop in depth and maturity as they are reunited in a mission to maintain peace.

However, in the midst of the assignment a power struggle between team members Geoffrey and Harold builds up.  Emotional maturity of individuals has not developed as fast as their physical and mental capabilities.  Advanced and futuristic technology fills the pages of the narrative as terrorists in their determination to retaliate, release missiles, unmanned space vehicles, asteroid class ships, and Gamma Ray weapons as well as use transporting beacons.  The Surculus have created a synthesized race of Andoreans to assist in their planned revenge. The final chapters are filled with danger, uncertainty, and a fast-paced unexpected conclusion.

I personally enjoyed Dan’s concept of interplanetary relations and the underlying interactions, and implications on societal and political issues. A clear but subtle message is interwoven throughout the book of the importance and value for life, of dedication and self sacrifice, and of loyalty. He has also given recognition to the presence of the supernatural in the universe. Through his character, Jack, he brings a message of hope in face of reality and his own personal belief that individuals can have a relationship with their creator. Neuman has an artistic, creative gift for interweaving the inter-galactic with spiritual and philosophical elements into his adventure stories. 

Dan uses suspense, adventure, and transcendence to engage the reader in experiencing a sense of living on the edge, fear and a search for meaning, which call the reader to a commitment to courageously impact others.

“OMA: Part 2” is a book that will be enjoyed by today’s young reader as well as seasoned science fiction fans. Neumann’s creative imagination and his extensive vocabulary enhance his writing skills. With maturity and fine tuning he is insured of future success and growth as he continues to develop his innate talent for writing. Dan has a tremendous potential for becoming a top notch novelist.

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